Hellzone's Rage

Hellzone walked around in the cold for a couple of hours looking for something or someone to kill, He look around not seeing anything but snow, He walked for a little big longer and he came across a small village. Hellzone walked into the village he saw some kids playing and having a good time. Hellzone tought to himself "This is perfect i a can finally kill" Hellzone put his hand out and the kid floated up and hellzone began to choke him to death, He grabbed the other kid with his real hand and choked him to death. Hellzone dropped both of there dead bodies and contiuned on with looking for more people to kill. Hellzone knocked on one of the door and no one came to it, He could see people inside threw the window. Hellzone drew his lightsaber and cute threw the door and walked into the small house and smirked " ITS TIME TO DIE " Hellzone cut there arms and legs off first and then he cut there head off. Hellzone walked outside and saw a lady with a small baby, His eyes light up he was very hungry. Hellzone ran out to her and killed her and picked up the baby and took a bit out of his head, with a matter of minutes hellzone had eaten the baby. Hellzone looked around and went back into the house that he killed everyone and went to take a nap.

Hellzone woke up and walked outside and he saw 100 storm troopers there ready to attack him, They looked at him and shouted "YOU WILL DIE FOR YOUR CRIMES" Hellzone drew his light saber and smirked "Lets do this then" he said. He rushed at the storm troopers and swung his saber at there legs cutting off there legs and he smirked. One of the troopers tried to punch hellzone but he caught his first and cut him in half. Hellzone jumped back and got into a fighting stance and shouted " I EAT BABIES" The storm troopers stepped back in fear and the ones that could crawl tried to crawl away. The crowd parted and and a man walked foward and looked at hellzone and spoke "You do you have no heart ? you kill without any emotion , You will pay for you crimes " The man took out a light saber from his side and and it light up green. Hellzone took a small step back and laughed " You think that you can kill me ?" Hellzone reached for his light saber and got into a battle stance. He motioned for the man to attack him. The man ran at hellzone and got ready to slash at hellzone. Hellzone put his hand up and lifted the man off the ground and began to squeeze and then he threw him hard into the ground. Hellzone walked over to him and cut off his hands and feet, The man screamed in pain Hellzone looked down at the man spit on him and turned around. Hellzone began to walk away when he heard the man yell at him "I'll kill you one day" Hellzone walked over to him and snapped his neck


To be contiuned

Can someone grade this ?

I give you 4x and -3 alligement

Hellzone laughed and looked at the rest of the storm troopers and spoke "Who want to die next" One of the men ran out of the crowd and hellzone used force lighting on him. Hellzone fired him like a deep fried chicken. Hellzone laughed and started to walk again with his lightsaber still in hand, He dragged in it on the ground and spoke "Whom ever crosses this line dies" The storm troopers did not budge they looked scared shitless. Hellzone and smiked "Have it you way, i am just going to eat for babiess" Hellzone walked away in the village and he enterd the hosptial and went to were they kept the babies and he began to feast.

TBC

Hellzone walked out of the hostpial and walked over to one of the Storm troopers and looked at him and made a hand motion "You will take to me on your ship" The storm trooper looked at hellzone and spoke "Follow me" Hellzone and the storm trooper walked on the the shit and hellzone punched into the cordanintaes of the ship and it took off taking heavy fire from the rest of the troops

2x for both and -1

Et-No-Kin looked from an observatory and watched hellzone take out his rage on the small village "This is not acceptable" Et-No-Kin ran downstairs and got in a CAP-2 and ran to the village. He jumped out of the CAP-2 and drew his lightsaber looking at the ship taking off and used to handed force and pulled against the wieght of the ship and pulled it so hard it crushed the entire village and he re-drew his lightsaber and cut open part of the ship to find hellzone unconscious.